Reviews for Time Sphere 2: Zayda's Secret

Nastrond 2008-05-19 ch 2,	abuseOkay then...you move very fast, too fast for comfort. More detail would make the story have a lot better flow. Work on that...as well as your conversations (sorry there's so much correction). BUT the plot is getting really good. I'm actually kind of excited to see who's wandering around acting like other people...but I'll have to read the other two chapters later.
ThePontificator 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseI liked the story alot. I read your first one in this series but this one was even better. Thanks for the story! Keep writing.
Nastrond 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuseLike I said earlier, note that grammer issue. Other than that, I can't wait to find out why they can't go to school. Update soon.