Ooh, I like this so far. I'm curious as to where you are heading with it. Just a few little grammatical errors, nothing too serious. You're a good writer. =D

Keep it up! I'll be keeping tabs on this one.

Off to check out some more of your work!

warm regards,
dark-hearted rose (Cassandra on blogger)

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I love stories where this power comes into play!

Keep writing! Double check your spelling, though. Otherwise, really well writen ^^