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| vase the girl 2008-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseHaha. I think the best are the last two stanzas. if i didn't know why you wrote it, I would have analyzed this very deeply. ...this could be analyzed very deeply, too. |
| caralita 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abusei feel your pain. the rhythm in this is wonderful, it reads like a song. the images were clear, as jagged as they are in real life. love it. love you. |