i really love this poem and the imagery you invoked and the play on words...amazing to me.

Clutching hearts

Covering eyes

Show your emotions

Who will feed tonight.

great great great job. i only wish you would say until instead of till.

until next poem!

-sv

Wow, another wonderful poem. Despite the darkness in the poem, it is very storng and thought provoking. Nice work.

Excellent vampiric poem!

I loved the comparison of emotions to a vampire wanting to feed, because it's so true; certain emotions, like anger and jealousy, just keep feeding on you until there's nothing left. Nicely done!

even if it's dark by the way, I think this poem is powerful, what you mean there were deep thoughts.

ps: yr avatar is cool.