Great job again Entrancia! I'm very pleased to read this chapter and find that you're doing well! I'll make sure to keep in touch with you, but if you find that it's too much trouble, just let me know. Great job again!

-Leeland :D

I hate to sound cliche but OMG! Is this really based on a true story? Because I believe the same thing has hapened to me. But my story is so much more complicated. Bleh.

I like your story so far. Very realistic and sorta cliche but the way you write it makes it seem so...not cliche. confusing, right?

I love your language and how, even though your telling a story, it /is/ still like a letter being written to a specific person. It's really cute, I love it (:

hey. i like it [:
very cute. cliched - yes, but sincere.

Wow. I love just about everything about this. You needn't apologize for your language; it's perfectly simple to understand, and I could just relate to you/protagonist so much.

I love how it feels like you're telling us a story, the casualness of your words. Your writing is simple but effective; it draws me into your world ever so easily.

Please do continue to update this, alright? Looking forward to the next chapters =)

sR

Wow, I don't care how slow you are at writing but I love your story. I'll wait as long as it takes if you promise to keep writing and posting. I love the way you do it like a letter. I have a oneshot like that. (It's called You Loved Me, I Love You if you want to read it.)

Anyways, I like the causal way you write. Sometimes when people try to be causal like this it gets sloppy and, well, not so good, but that's not the case with you. It's really, really good.

I'll wait forever for an update but please don't make me. Update soon!

Once again, I can relate to you. Although I'm still not out of the prison normal people call Middle School, I can relate alot to your 6th grade year. That's sorta when I discovered how nerve-racking it was to realize new emotions. Espcially romantic ones...

This is... too much for words. I love how brutely honest you are throughout it, and it both warms and hardens my heart. 5th grade... yeash. I can relate. This is truely sweet.

i like it

don't be so defensive: it is what it is, you are who you are, if someone else doesn't like it, then what the hexizzle ever.

Even if this is "cliche", it still has that something that makes it a good story. It's like Metafiction, where it acknowledges itself as writing and draws attention to that fact. Quite honestly, even if it is cliche, it is not because it recognizes that cliche element. And the fact that it was real, from your own past, adds a human element most cliche stories miss. So, in other words, this is probably the best at a cliche story you will ever write. ^_^ I like it, and I am honored that you choose to put such a personal piece up here. Thank you.