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| Random-Idiocity 2008-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent flow and a wonderful piece. Keep it Up! |
| Moondog Dozier 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseThe active individual classifiers at the beginning of each line, "Classify me, Devastate me" etc, guide the reader into the scene well. Very fluid. Good work. |