 Carina 2008-05-13 . chapter 4Hey good story. I did think this last chapter was a little rushed though with the character development. Like there's no insight as to why Jaryn decided to go to church, or how he's actually feeling about Scotty, or how Jade is feeling at confronting Jaryn. Is she scared? Intimidated? |
 Hiddengirl10 2008-05-12 . chapter 3YAY I have a chapter dedicated to me =D, I'm loving this story and can't wait for the next chapter, which hopefully will come out soon, please? Anyway, great story, I love the plot, and now I wait ... =D |