I like your repetition, it helps the flow of the poem. The imagery is very nice.

Great Job.

There was a deep love to this poem that really isnt explainable for me. And the below quote is something that I relate to from both sides.

When I am able to mend,
I’ll make you whole and unharmed and always safe.

LOve it!
~Shippo

...I love you.

*hearts*