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| AK the Twilight 2008-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseYeah, graduation is a time of old ends and new beginnings. This poem really sums up the celebration pretty well. You just need to try and make it more poetic. It starts off pretty well, but it just seems to be a synopsis of what graduation. Don't get me wrong; it's a true-to-the-system synopsis, but what are the emotions of graduation? You have the substance in this poem; just try to add some style into it to make it feel more complete. Good job, overall. |