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Reviews For: The Transfer

Betman
2008-05-09
ch 4,
abuseGood stuff. I hate Enker though. Kill him off for me =D
Ratava100d
2008-05-09
ch 4,
abuseyou update things really quickly, that was a gd chapter any way thanx ^_^!
Vampriss222
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abuseI wonder where Riff is now.Nice chapter btw a little weird though.Why would his own mother want to kill him?







-Vampriss2
Ratava100d
2008-05-08
ch 3,
abusethat was another good chspter, thanx for updatin it. please put the next chapter on soon ^_^!
Ratava100d
2008-05-08
ch 2,
abusethanx for updatin that was really quick ^_^!
SleeplessRyuu
2008-05-08
ch 3,
abuseYay, he's an alien! XD

Write more plxkthx. O: It seems interesting~
Gunnz
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseGood story. Im dying to see what this other world is like
rockoutbby
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseA great beginning. I'd love to see more.

P.S. Check out my little sister's story! She's 8 years old and typed this up all by herself. /s/2514104/1/The_Door_of_Dreams
Ratava100d
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abusethat was a great start to the story, can't wait to read more ^_^!
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