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| AK the Twilight 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseOkay, this really had nothing to do with Pancakes. Oh well. This song's chorus is great and I love the fierce descriptions in the whole song. The words feel unique and were definitely highlights. This would go great with music; I can picture the lyrics being sung easily. Great job with this one. It was a treat. |