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Reviews For: Pancakes and other sweets

AK the Twilight
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseOkay, this really had nothing to do with Pancakes.

Oh well.

This song's chorus is great and I love the fierce descriptions in the whole song. The words feel unique and were definitely highlights. This would go great with music; I can picture the lyrics being sung easily.

Great job with this one. It was a treat.
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