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| M. Jayne 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. I just went through something very much like this - but I had eight weeks, not five. Enough about my personal life, however... I really enjoyed this story. You tend to over-use semicolons a little bit, but that's no big deal. This actually reminds me somewhat of my own writing style. Keep up the good work! |
| Quoven 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was an awesome story. Perfect. Thank you. |
| openheadspace 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseMy small zucchini? Um...okay. I don't really get the title. But I like the story! It's sad in a good dang-that-sucks kinda way. ;) |