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Reviews For: Mon Petite Courgette

M. Jayne
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuseWow. I just went through something very much like this - but I had eight weeks, not five. Enough about my personal life, however...

I really enjoyed this story. You tend to over-use semicolons a little bit, but that's no big deal. This actually reminds me somewhat of my own writing style. Keep up the good work!
Quoven
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseI thought this was an awesome story. Perfect. Thank you.
openheadspace
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseMy small zucchini?
Um...okay. I don't really get the title. But I like the story!
It's sad in a good dang-that-sucks kinda way. ;)
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