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| poison-hearts-xo 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abusePersonally, I feel that the concept could've been portrayed a little better using metaphors. When you say everything literally, it sounds immature. |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseYes, I can see why you're satisfied with this, cause this is one of my favorites! I love your rhyming, message, and your way of expressing yourself! You're an excellent writer! This boy sure is lucky, and I hope you'll show it to him! Keep writing good songs! You should try sending them to a publishing house. I'm not kidding. The Reverse Edge Blade |