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| Arina222 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Very funny. Especially the sarcasm. I suggest that you reorganize the stanzas a little though.Maybe put the third stanza first? |
| Calidris alba 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThe last lines are awesome! lol I might just try some of the examples the next time I get asked "Are we there yet?" lol good job! |
| Kiwi-kiwi6 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseOh my word, I love this! I was laughing so hard! I'll use these answers on my kids when I grow up! Good job! |
| The Jelly Bean of Doom 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abusehey you need to give me credit for that cause i helped write that good times good times |