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| fgee 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseireally enjoyed reading this you have a good sence of stressed and unstressed silables and where they should go which made this sonet move free and smothly fgee |
| erthiaalyana 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, I'm suprised this doesn't have more reviews, I guess people are just lazy I guess. This is beautifully written, I can feel your pain and sorrow through your words, it's very powerful and touching... So now that that's done, do you think you could maybe go check out my angst story? I have but one review and I'm eager to find out what people think of it. |