it's really good, though kind of sad.

xo

Ah!

I cherish discovering worthy poetry!

:)

Your structure is very sparse and minimalistic

Love it

Yet the description and metaphors are so descriptive and not, ya know?

Like a mist...

Your tone and diction are perfect

Contrary to what others said, I enjoyed the lack of punctuation.

It's not a requirement; poetry is very free.

And, it suits your theme to lack the punctuation.

I loved this...

XOXO

Aweome! Really good! I really loved it! It was so good! Write more poetry!

Undrahas

The rhythm was nice, and I liked the last three lines especially, but you really need some punctuation thrown in there.