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| AK the Twilight 2008-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseTragic, indeed. Your choice of words is very good; I like "black waterfall of sorrow." It just grabbed me. Love has a nasty tendency to end in tragedy, I know that; but despite my optimism, this poem delivers a throttle that couldn't be ignored. It's kinda a shame that your couldn't use more of those clinching descriptions. Regardless, I really like this. Keep up the good work. |