Reviews for excitement climax anger depression

simpleplan13 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abuseI love the alliteration throughout this, it's really well placed. reach crescendo breath and sigh.. breathe would fit better in my opinion but if i have you what to worry?.. what's I like this a lot... it flows really well and is interesting. Nicely written. PS If youre bored this weekend check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile).
Cindy Moon 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseIt's definitely been a really long time since I've been on fictionpress, I never thought that school would consume so much of my life, but hopefully I can start posting again. In the meantime, I can read your work! The diction is wonderful in this one. -Cindy Moon *)
Lenners 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like the first line. But again, there doesn't really be a focus at some parts, like the third stanza. What's that all about? It seems like you're going through this whirlwind of emotions. I really think you can express yourself better than this :] It is quite amusing how you repeat yourself, like "conflicts conflicted" and "yearn to be yearned". I love the last stanza, my favourite part~ My only pet peeve, you spelled pigeon wrong :p