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| ashli-may.x 2008-06-29 ch 1,  | abusei like this a lot. it's intriguing and familiar all at the same time. i particularly liked the last line "With skin lighter than ivory, she has reached popularity" because it's kind of ambiguous. does that make sense? lol. hope it does. anyway, i really like it and i'm off to read some more of your stuff! PS. thanks so much for the reviews you've left me. i know i'm a really slack replier. but really, thank you, they mean so much. :) |
| vase the girl 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is a GREAT start, and I have gone through a situation similar to this... questioning my own shallowness... and i really feel like you could have went on with this amazing piece! |