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| Love.Is.Free. 2008-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseReminds me of my cousin... Very well written. You captured the mothers point of view quite accurately, I think. |
| painted.music 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa Ah, what a wonderful piece. I know, that sounds a bit odd when reading this type of story... but it really was excellent. Truly amazing. And just... just... no comment, really. I loved it. I have nothing to add or change or suggest, which may not be helpful for improving but is certainly the honest truth. (Honest truth, right... because there's such thing as dishonest truth?) Ha det -Shan- |