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| Angela Nichole 2008-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseThis is pretty good! Keep writing! :) |
| Aelfin 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. Isca you've amazed me once again =] I completely relate to this! 'I conversed with your ghost often.' It's good to know i'm not the only one that does that =P Aelfi x |
| Alice Sleeps 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI like the longing tone compared to the surprisingly happy underscoring, like you've found contentment in wanting something you can't have. |
| Perfumey 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! |
| McKinley Cooper 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThat one makes me crazy--it just...building a home...talking with your ghost often...the imagery is spellbinding and truthful. Just more, McKinley |
| miscellanea 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI love how you noted that 'eyes' smile. That was a nice piece. It showed the frustration (would you call it frustration?) or anyways, trapped-ed-ness of being completely in love with someone you can't have. |
| Ajax Elpis 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI don't normally like free verse for one reason: People suck at it. Badly... It's rough, uncontrolled, and erratic. But when it's done right it's amazing. It jumps and flows without reason, thought, or limitation. This is most definately the later. |