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Double AA
2008-05-09
ch 2,
abuseWait. What? The Skull from under the gift cart? my goodness, you have one weird mind.
Keep Writing!
Double AA
Ms. Critic
2008-05-09
ch 2,
abuseUm, nice. For a first attempt. Good...plot? Keep writing!
Banana's Randomness
2008-05-09
ch 2,
abuselol! The Skull from under the gift cart! hehe

I love that skull from under the couch, he so funny!
Double AA
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseI guess this is pretty good for someone your age, keep working at your writing. The only way to get good, is to practice. So good work, I think.
Banana's Randomness
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseHaha, that was short. It sounds almost like something my friend Izzi would write, except she'd have more randomness. I liked the part with the MAGICAL SKULL THAT LIVES UNDER THE PARK BENCH! haha. XD
Princess Dargon
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseIt was amusing as a dialgue type thing. but I would suggest, if you are going to make more stories, to add more description. And, in stories like this you might want to put in more 'he said' 'it said', cause I got lost and confused as to who was talking some times.

Still, amusing! Thanks for posting!
Love.Is.Free.
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseWow... Weird.

I admit it. I giggled. Thank you for that ^^
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