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| Tearlit 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI see you updated a lot while I was away! I just remebered to check... This was an extremely interesting poem. I like the scathing tone of it in parts, and your formatting is exquisite. The formatting almost says more than the words, if that makes sense...It makes a bold statement, there we go. It enunciates for you. My favorite bit was the very last line, how it's like this person has totally destroyed who you thought you were. Great job, dear! ~meg |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem! It's really well written, so that it's like an answer to a question, but yet that question is still haunting you. Great poem! |
| between the lyrics 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseah, that was beautiful. i loved how you ended this piece. to me, it was like a strong "no" to answer the question. something so strong to show that you've moved on from whatever has happened, but then, in the back of your mind, you're wondering, not so strong now, what it is that person has done to you to cause you to be this way. kind of like a weakness in your mind that, no matter what, you wouldn't reveal- especially to that person. just my little interpretation there. xD great job. |