|Reviews for Ghosts|
| make way for the inbetweener 12/22/12 . chapter 1
Brilliant. Simply brilliant.
| classic violet 11/2/10 . chapter 1
Beautiful. The third, fifth, sixth and seventh group of lines really got to me. Good job.
| simpleplan13 5/24/08 . chapter 1
I love how you describe her crying in the first too lines because it's very original, which is hard since crying is discussed a lot in poetry.
I like the format with the parenthesis... those fit well and the descriptions of Father Time were really nice.
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| Aquafied 5/7/08 . chapter 1
makes me think of persephone.
yet much more modern
| Random-Idiocity 5/7/08 . chapter 1
Excellent choice of words, makes this piece have great flow and imagery. Keep it Up!