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| Kenny's Friend 2008-05-09 ch 2,  | abuse"Now all she thought about was the survival of her." - uh, that's a very odd way to put it. It's gonna get edgy, eh? Good stuff, and great writing. |
| Kenny's Friend 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseNice writing as usual, although I've got no sense of setting. Characters on white paper, basically. However, the idea you're selling is great - I can't wait to see where you take this one. |