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| ohthevoices 2008-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseI liked how you listed off all of the things you wish for, and then ended it the way you did. Nicely done =) |
| systemofup 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI like it especially the last line ;) |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseAnd nothings wrong with wishing. We just need to be realistic and realize that some wishes are able to come true, if we put forth the effort to try. You did a very good job with this. Keep it Up! |