Lol, so British. Tea solves all problems. Or so I'm told, as I don't like it myself.

Well, I've been reading this over the last couple of months, and I have to say I've thoroughly enjoyed what I've read. Your style of writing is truly engaging: I was given a clear mental image of every single character, each with their own quirks, and I always wanted to know what happened next. It is also good to see a piece written so concisely; there is nothing worse than someone who waffles!

Also (I don't know if this is a good or bad thing to you) to my mind, this would make a wonderful film. Or videogame at the very least. :)

I hope to see more writing from you in the near future! Good luck with it all.
Yours,
Blonde Dr.Who-Guru With Brains

Ooh, your writing is excellent, and so is the story! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

poor jadelin! hope things get straightened out...

good job. I must say I'm enthralled. i would be very happy if you were to write more soon. it was a little rough in a few spots, but on the whole I was interested the entire time. I especially like the characters of Sir Gregory (he's so funny) and Wan Xiao Ping (I like dragons)

Unable to avoid bias; I can only affirm your affection for writing is unmistakable. You clearly demonstrate a talent for witty observation in your gentle conception of such imaginative; humorous and enchanting characters. An enjoyable read, which I would highly recommend, I anticipate your next novella will be even tauter and replete with the same crisp prose.

You have an excellent clarity about your writing. While it might be possible to use less words in some places, overall you seem to be an exciting new talent. I really hope you keep writing so that you reach your full potential. I'm looking forward to more.