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| TimGooding 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abuseYou have an excellent clarity about your writing. While it might be possible to use less words in some places, overall you seem to be an exciting new talent. I really hope you keep writing so that you reach your full potential. I'm looking forward to more. |