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Reviews For: Silhouettes

thepapercult
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuseHello. This made me feel dreamy, as if a world of possibilities is actually waiting outside my doorstep. Lovely poem. Thanks also for reviewing my story.
-Edda
AK the Twilight
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abuseIt was a little tough finding the chorus, but this is a very well-written song. Musically, this could probably work with softer instrumentals. Your lyrics, especially in the first few stanzas, are sophisticated and realistic. Comparing the moon to a coin surprised me, but it's very unique.

Great job with this.
Little Black Piano
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abusei like! good work!
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