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| thepapercult 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abuseHello. This made me feel dreamy, as if a world of possibilities is actually waiting outside my doorstep. Lovely poem. Thanks also for reviewing my story. -Edda |
| AK the Twilight 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseIt was a little tough finding the chorus, but this is a very well-written song. Musically, this could probably work with softer instrumentals. Your lyrics, especially in the first few stanzas, are sophisticated and realistic. Comparing the moon to a coin surprised me, but it's very unique. Great job with this. |
| Little Black Piano 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusei like! good work! |