Reviews for Beyond My Control

Neomanga88 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseCool Poem My Favorite Line: "In a sea if chaos, lies my sanity beyond my control" I feel like my sanity is beyond my control in a sea of chaos as well. So kudos
AK the Twilight 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseAlthough the "sand in an hourglass" cliche could've been done without, the rest of the poem is well-crafted and full of powerful language. The "sea of chaos" line is exceptionally well written and the rest of the poem, aside the cliche, is definitely excellent. It's tough to write such powerful poetry, I'm sure, but this was an excellent one, especially being the first of yours posted here on FictionPress. Excellent job.
MyWorldisBlack 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abusei certainly would agree witht he last line!