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| Born Restless 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abuseSounds interesting. I really just like your writing in general. Your plot hasn't picked up yet (strange book that leads to other worlds has been done before) but it seems to have potential. Plus the great-aunt said "**." |
| SomethingNifty 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseWell, so far, I think it's great! I didn't catch any typos or grammer issues. I usually don't like it when people "play god", I prefer first person, myself, but I really enjoyed this one anyways! Keep up the awesome work! Until we meet again! ~SomethingNifty |