Reviews for The Last Goodbye - FictionPress.com

Clarelouise 2008-05-19 ch 1,	abusei rele dont know how i missed this! i suppose i always eagerly reach for bianca as soon as i get 2 ur page but this is so gd! soo sad, even though its only the first chapter it made me feel for the characters. I also like the way they remain anonymous even tho their characters are really beginning to carry out. and the rain for some reason is rele vivd in my imagination and fts with the mood perfectly. lozzie strikes again! :D
white.marble.rose 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseyou are too depressed, missy! write something about.. oh, i don't know. sunshine? fluffy bunny rabbits? the possibilities are endless! (or is that recycling? i forget.) anyway, it was really good writing. convincing and all, just miserable! i am never going to win with you. love x
Aomera 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseaw this is so sad lozpoz. but it's beautiful and wonderfully written - the emotions are so carefully portrayed and the scene not over set. love it. ever watched spooks by any chance? best program. love x
dawn9800 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseOOh sounds good!
ContemplativeJoyce 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseThis was so sad :( I liked it though. Good job :)