Nice fluffy story! I really enjoyed the story, Good Job!

this is cute but i was wondering - how can you in love at the age of FIVE.
It just makes no sense sorry =)

Aw that was so cute... :] I really really liked it, even though it was complete fluff. Fluff is nice, it keeps you warm and fuzzy inside. :]

that was absolutely amazing!
i had a smirk/grin on the entire time, i love stories that do that =)

I loved Chas' character, though Jillian's character was a little lacking I can still see why Chas fell for her. (perhaps it was his point of view, but I felt like jillian only liked going with the flow, she wasn't very original)

Anyway, nonetheless, it was adorable! great work!

joey

Haha. This is so random but i was just doing a Pirates of the Caribbean marathon and i thought of this story.

Another line that would be wonderful for this story could be 'I love you like Jack Sparrow loves the Black Pearl'.

Like i said. Random.

Great idea. I really liked it!

Haha! So adorable =) I love the analogies. Especially the "I love you like a dog loves licking his own crotch" wow, that was hysterical. =) Anyway, good job!

fluff or not, I enjoyed it immensely. It was so sweet and simple.:3 sometimes we don't have to know the harsh details. it's the simple and serene moments that we commit to memory forever.

i loved it. thank you for writing this.:)

This was absolutely adorable! It was cute, the way he told her how much he loved her every time. You did a great job. :)

stories like this put me in actual physical pain.
PHYSICAL PAIN AT THE FUCKING CUTENESS
coz it is.. it's just so cute..
yay

aww, this is so sweet!

aww such a sweet little story :)

One-shots are the best, aren't they?

I liked how it was lengthy but it never dragged in any parts. The stages and progression from childhood to adulthood are always great to read. Nicely done =]

absolutely cute! very original!

Aw, so cute! I love the similes in this. So hilariously adorably cute! :D

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