The story is nice, but you lost me a bit in the ghost part... I don't know, maybe you could describe him a little bit more? And update soon!

Holy poo. You better update. I swear you can't just leave it hanging like that. Honestly. But really, this is a fabulous story. I must say, WOW!! Please update. Please, please, please!!

A great read! The story is captivating from the very beginning, and you have some really interesting characters. There is only one bit of criticism that I could give and that is the introduction of the ghost, Jordan, in the middle of the chapter felt a little arkward. It might just be because at the beginning of the chapter it felt like a very realistic-type story and then all of a sudden you toss us a supernatural element like it was just a normal thing. I don't know what you can do to fix that, or perhaps its only me that has a problem with it and you don't have to fix it at all, but it's just something to think about. But it is a very good story so far, and that is a great way to end a chapter.

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Hah, I have to say it was the Nancy Drew in the summary that drew me in. I love the distinct personalities you have set aside for each of your characters, especially the teacher and the protagonist. You also ended the chapter beautifully! Great cliffhanger!

The only thing I might mention is that I wish we could have seen a little more of Jordon's personality. I know he's a ghost, but you did the other's so well. Maybe we can see it later...

Overall, excellent work!