Reviews for Ring around the rosy,Ashes Ashes, We all fall down

Fading Illusion 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseIt's interesting, but you might want to re-read it to check for tiny errors I found. Anyway, I'd advise you to change your summary. It's not very captivating, and readers get annoyed to see summaries that don't even give them an inkling to what the story is about. The only clue you gave was the word vampires. >.< So, good luck and keep writing! -Fading Illusion
XxApplePiexX 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseThanks x-XSirenx-x, i took your advice and fixed it up. I swear I read it over but i guess i missed some things. Thanks again ^_^
x-XSirenX-x 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseIt's deffinately interesting so far. I think it might help a little if you used spell check fter finishing. Occasionally it was hard to follow =/