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| AK the Twilight 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abuseDreams do make interesting stories and this was no exception. I'm not entirely sure what your dream was meant to represent, if at all, but this was continuously interesting. I would be interested if this was expanded into a longer story; I think it'd be cool to see how you manipulate this into something longer. Overall, this was a great read, though a bit lacking in descriptions and stylish language. That doesn't stop this from being a great dream fic, and being great for a possibly longer fic. Awesome job. |