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| Callie Noelle 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abusewow. that was really good. i really love writing like this. writing with meaning. writing with a story behind it. i know there's a story hiding behind the words of this poem and i know what it feels like. this sound really good. it flows nicely and it makes the reader feel what you feel. i thouroughly enjoyed reading this because i could feel the emotion behind it. |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseVery pretty. I like the fact that you decided to rhyme. I think it adds to the poem (though I love rhyming poetry myself, so I might be a bit biased). Keep up the good work. (: |