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| stained blue 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abusesimple, (just a bit cliche,) and lovely. |
| Shasta Valentine 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abusei dont know this poem is good, but i guess that's its problem-its just good. but i do appreciate the emotion in this, but jeez, this piece puts the mo in emo. but good job. -sv |