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| Yusuf 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuse** the world, you are not who you ain't. Don't give a ** what 'normal' is. ~Yusuf |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseIt's amazing how little parents know about their children. I guess sometimes they just want their child to have everything they didn't and to be the best that they can be and go overboard and don't know when to stop. That's what it looks like here. And they even decided to throw in a psychiatrist in the game too. Parents *sigh* |
| poison-hearts-xo 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI like the concept, as it's one to which I can relate, however, the wording is a bit primitive. |
| Undrahas 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseHa! No matter how hard we try no one can be perfect. Sure we all want to be, but no human is perfect. One being is perfect, and that being is above the Law. Other than that no one is perfect. We all wanna be who we wanna be. There ain't no changing that in life. Sooner or later we all meet somone who wants to change us into something that we are not. It makes no sense, you know what I mean? People want me to be less loud, and crap, but I cannot change who I am. Anyway, very good poem. I really loved it, and I hope you write more like this one, and others. I am so proud of myself. I typed most of this review without looking at my keyboard which is something I can never do. So this is the first time I've ever done it, and I am so proud of myself. Sorry. Had to put in my accomplishment for some strange unknown reason. |