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| boredbottom 2008-05-15 ch 20,  | abuseoh my gosh! ah! oh.. err critic it.. LOVE IT!sweet and straight and to the point. |
| misery sister 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseShoudln't this belong in Fanfiction(dot)net? |
| boredbottom 2008-05-14 ch 19, | abuseno! ended to soon! |
| Betrayed and Broken 2008-05-14 ch 17, | abuseshort chapter but better than nothing. Keep updating. |
| boredbottom 2008-05-14 ch 17, | abusehah poor Brendon cantw ait for the next chapter |
| boredbottom 2008-05-13 ch 16, | abuseaw! why won't someone make a move already!? gr! (hahahahahahha hoohoohoohoo heheheehhehe unnecessary stuff) keep on writing!! |
| Sarah 2008-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story :]] |
| Betrayed and Broken 2008-05-10 ch 9, | abuseVery good plot. keep updating. |