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| Gollummullog 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abuseHa. Your change in structure was clever. Your iams are rather off in the first few lines, but because you speak clearly and intelligently, with a sort of wry humour, I don't think it detracts from your poem. Nice job. I wrote a sonnet once about writing just half a sonnet. It was bizarre. |