"You haven’t even got a car, Lawrence.”

“That’s why it takes me forever.”

I had to stop in the middle of my reading and say that, that was hilarious. Good stuff

I think that happy endings are the best for this kind of story, so good job with that. I know what it is like to lose interest in a story. Look forward to reading more from you.

~SirScott

Even if Eric was a tad undeveloped, I liked this story as a whole. I'm sorry you lost interest in it, but maybe I'll read some of your other stories. =D

Yay!! A happy ending!! That's a bit unusual for you. I really liked this story, the voice was really funny. There's a weird typo when he's on the phone with Juliet. it says, I just Erin to take me back. Well, it's been fun. Hope to see another story.

:) I loved it, I absolutely loved it. And you know what? It makes more sense just ending here. Carrying it out isn't always the best thing for stories. And for eighth chapter, you ended it phenomenally :) I lovededededed it. Especially the notes telling about what they used to do. "I miss your multi-colored socks, your weird eating habits" :D:D Funny, yet cute and sweet at the same time :):):) Great job for another great story. :D Wewt, and I loved Pinstripe Tiretracks too :) So I guess I'll be looking into that soon. Great to have ya back!
-Gabbie

Gosh...talk about an awkward evening.
I'm glad you updated. =D

And the plot thickens!! Well not really but I really like this chapter. Yay!! I can't think of anything else. Hurry and write more!!

Now we know why he slept with Ben's wife. It's hard to believe anyone Natalia's age hasn't been to a funeral. I guess some people get lucky. Good to see this story updated.

~SirScott

hey hey, interesting conversation, hahah, his weird need to sleep with any woman who 'needs' him was actually sort of helpful.

"Then she warns me not to sleep with Natalia again. Duh, Juliet. Duh. As if I needed to be reminded of that. But I guess that she means it well, and I can’t really hold it against her."
Especially since he admits there's still sexual tension. Hopefully he behaves himself this trip.

His whole family is pretty messed up though, and he's brave to sit with his brother like nothing had happened. Or dumb, either/ or.

:) Ben doesn't seem like such a bad guy anymore. I kinda get where he's coming from. And I honestly think him and Erin would be cute together :( Too bad she broke up with him. Great chapter! :)
-Gabbie

Gah! Familiar names again! Ben and Natalia, my sister and boyfriend's brother, good god. *facepalm* I hope the funeral isn't too bad :D Great chapter. If I see a new character soon named Gabrielle and/or Maddie though, there might be a slight delay in reviews due to needed hospital treatment from instant faintation. :D Great chapter again! Very funny, too
-Gabby

Lol, "They don't appreciate free will. That's okay. I can work with that." Hmm, Erin seems more probable, and less evil now that I know he cheated on her, which I didn't really pick up on in the beginning. Julia has very slim probability, though she's still mad awesome and my second favorite character. Kathy is bitin' the dust on my probability list. Gosh, Lawrence really needs to learn how to talk to girls. He failed. Phailed! :P Can't wait to read more :D
-Gabby

HAH! I knew he'd end up with Julia! Even if for a small part! The weird thing is, in this you chose so many names of people in my family. Lawrence, Julia, Arthur and Kathy. Jeezles peezles. Well, great chapter, can't wait to read more :D
-Gabby

Hahah! :D I wonder...hmm, who could he possibly be with so far? Kathy (highly doubt), Julia/Juliet (very possible so far), or Erin (hell, she shouldn't even be in the possibilities she's so damn evil)? Immah go with Juliet for now, she's mad awesome. Great chapter!
-Gabby

I need to figure out where I left off with Greggy and Aiden, I miss them. :) Great chapter. You really made distinct and awesome characters. Funny, too :D Keep it up!
-Gabby