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Reviews For: Boy Kisser
Rosey Prosey
2008-05-09
ch 1, 		abuseI like the whole idea you have going

and the irony

and the general ironic feeling

and the way...well, I don't really know how to say it...but I guess, the way quaint things are phrased quaintly...?

but yeah. good going and all!
BellonaFlayreRiver
2008-05-08
ch 1, 		abusethis makes me sad.. and think about my own experiences. so often we run away from the things we need and want most for fear of them leaving us first. i like the way you formatted this, though maybe next time no "..." in between? unless you want it to seem like someone is thinking or a great length of time had passed. lovely.
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