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| thepapercult 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so ironic. It feels like it's not such a bad thing from the way the whole situation is written. Nice job. |
| Eve's Deception 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusehaha thsi is really good, i liked the morbidness of it. however, the last line kinda of stops the flow a bit i think it got caught at the word family just because you rhymed jiffy and kitty so well. but overall i really enjoyed this. short sweet and twisted. great job. |