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| Jezebel Lee 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseFirstly, I'm guessing that "such" is supposed to be "search", so thats just a hiccup in the story. Your title is what puts the poem into another perspective and makes the reader feel that kind of longing, so incorporating it into the actual poem could be really nice. Overall, it sums up a lovely, relatable seniment! |