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| Isca 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseI liked this. "Addicted to the undertow" is a good idea for a poem. |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuse*slightly speechless* I love this-it's not cliche at all, andthe idea of an 'undertow' is definitely interesting in this. The flow is amazing...keep it up =]. --pammy--x3 |