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| Samuel Alon 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abuseFreedom to the Ants, I'm doing what I can to find any errors. It would have been a great help if you helped me point out what I've done wrong, grammatical or word-wise, if you have seen it. |
| Freedom To The Ants 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseInteresting Prologue. The Series Introduction, though, confused me...A lot... There were a few grammatical errors in the story but other than that, it was fine. |