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| Nemonus 2008-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseI quite like the concept of "Why?" as answer to all the deep questions. I have the feeling that I've read something like your 'What if the world stopped spinning' before, about whether we'd fly off or not, so that lost some of its impact. However, the "Why?" bit makes this. It's not a poem with perfect word-capture (although the fourth line is nice) but it's clever. |