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| CarlyJo 2008-05-23 ch 1,  | abuseAww, cute! I loved it!! ~Carly |
| d666lisa 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant oneshot, but coke is so much better than pepsi :P |
| x3life 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseaw this was really cute!! =) |
| Pinkamoo 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseThat is really cute :p I have to say, it wasn't hard to guess what he was going to shut her up with :p But that's a good thing. I liked! |
| Lily Llynn 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseHello. RiceAddikt from Notebook. As I said there, this is an awesome oneshot. (: I'm going to go add it to my c2 now, hehe. (: |
| REBEL.chickk 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseLove. |
| Weirderest 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseSoda kisses. Brilliant. Coke pawns jut by the way, and i'm not just saying that because Jack-Jack's so pretty. Loved the kiss. So real with her being totally confused about what to do. The Aunt Elma story killed me. I can totally imagine him telling her. Cweet. |
| ariebeth 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseaww cute idea!! i love it |
| starlit x sky 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseAww! That was really cute! I liked how they were arguing at the start about Pepsi and Coke and then you ended with it. Great job |