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| housefanforever08 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseOh my gosh, this is one of the best stories I've ever read on here. Amazing job, so well written and a great storyline. |
| AK the Twilight 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseDeath is commonplace in modern fiction, but you do make some interesting progressions with the main character. It's odd to see someone like Kelly who seems to act so apathetic at a funeral, but you do give her a unique personality that's worth reading on just to see what comes up. Your mechanics are spot-on, and your dialogue is interesting and realistic. This story is very well written and I'd like to see more of what Kelly's life has in store. Great job with this. |