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| Li Kaida 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseDark... Nice |
| Ivy Orion 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThe structure, while it appears to be really random (to me at least), is really great actually. It rather surprised me how well it flowed after first glancing at it. I'm glad you're stronger than this... Possibly my favorite thing you've written... you're getting so good. |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuse*twitch* i've been here before... There is lots of emotion in this. The last few lines ("I won't ask for help I won't cry out to you It's just something I'd rather not do But until I'm loved Cutting will do") are amazing... I hope you find another way to deal with your problems, I know for me writing is always an outlet for anything I'm keeping in. Be strong, keep writing. |
| PrincessPeaches 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh! That is so sad! It's brilliantly written, it really gets how you feel across. I know it's easy to say, not so easy to do, but cutting yourself isn't the answer. And believe me I really DO know. I hope you find a way out of doing that. |